My rating: 3 of 5 stars
There were some grammatical errors that got distracting at points on my Nook. The characters and setting was interesting, but unfortunately they got drowned out by an overly complex plot and some confusing moments, especially in the middle. Perhaps with better transitions it would be a more fluid read.
The storyline itself was intriguing, but it could use a bit of tweaking in terms of writing style before I could give it another star.
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