My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Intriguing introduction that immediately drew me into the storyline! There were a few grammatical errors considering the quality of the story - otherwise, this would have easily earned 5 stars! There was plenty of action, interesting characters, and an intricate plot that really helped this eBook stand out from the crowd. While there are religious topics touched on, I don't feel that it ever got "preachy" or "judgmental" but fell more along the lines of The DaVinci Code with its exploration of the mystic. Great read, just needs a little editing!
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Thank you for your kind words. What you said was exactly what I was after when I wrote the book. You are right about the grammatical errors. Why didn't somebody tell me to listen in English class.
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Tim - thanks so much for stopping by! :) I really did enjoy the story very much - if there was a way to give half stars it would have been 4.5 stars! ;)
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